virtio-msg: editorial changes from Peter

* add missing ')'
* clarify that bus properties are advertised from the bus to the transport
  layer and change "driver" to bus or transport layer to more clearly
  show whom is targeted by the requirements
* Avoid passive voice and clearly specify which element must conform
* s/All encoding of values and fields/All values and fields/
* Use u8 and le16 types for virtio_msg_message
* s/must be zero of Bus messages/must be zero for Bus messages/
* use ':' at end of item in list, not ';'
* Add missing verb and s/posted/available in Runtime Notifications


Signed-off-by: Bill Mills <bill.mills@linaro.org>

Author: wmamills

transport-msg.tex

@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ \subsubsection{Purpose}
 
   \item \textbf{Reduce per-bus complexity:}
   Buses can implement a fully message-based workflow (including optional
-  enumeration via \busref{GET_DEVICES} and hotplug via \busref{EVENT_DEVICE}
+  enumeration via \busref{GET_DEVICES} and hotplug via \busref{EVENT_DEVICE})
   or they can discover and manage devices through
   alternative means such as platform firmware data. In either case, they
   forward transport messages to and from each device.
@@ -110,7 +110,8 @@ \subsection{Basic Concepts}
 \subsubsection{Transport Revisions and Maximum Message Size}
 \label{sec:Virtio Transport Options / Virtio Over Messages / Basic Concepts / Revisions}
 
-Each \textbf{virtio-msg bus instance} advertises:
+Each \textbf{virtio-msg bus instance} advertises the following to the transport
+layer:
 \begin{itemize}
   \item A \textbf{transport revision} indicating the protocol version it
         supports. This revision is separate from the overall Virtio
@@ -122,19 +123,19 @@ \subsubsection{Transport Revisions and Maximum Message Size}
 \end{itemize}
 
 These parameters \emph{MAY} vary between bus instances within the same system.
-The driver obtains a bus's revision, maximum message size and list of features
-through an \emph{implementation-defined} mechanism, which could be:
+The bus implementation obtains a bus's revision, maximum message size and list
+of features through an \emph{implementation-defined} mechanism, which could be:
 \begin{itemize}
   \item A device tree or firmware method providing bus configuration,
   \item A message exchange during bus setup,
   \item A per bus instance list of properties,
   \item A static definition built into the driver for a known environment.
 \end{itemize}
 
-After learning these parameters, the driver \emph{MUST} respect them for all
-messages involving that bus instance. For example, it \emph{MUST NOT} send a
-message exceeding the \textbf{maximum message size}, and it \emph{MUST} avoid
-using advanced features or messages unavailable in the bus's advertised
+After learning these parameters, the transport layer \emph{MUST} respect them
+for all messages involving that bus instance. For example, it \emph{MUST NOT}
+send a message exceeding the \textbf{maximum message size}, and it \emph{MUST}
+avoid using advanced features or messages unavailable in the bus's advertised
 \textbf{transport revision}.
 
 \paragraph{virtio-msg revisions}
@@ -188,8 +189,8 @@ \subsubsection{Configuration Generation Count}
 or the response to \msgref{GET_CONFIG} which also both provide the device's
 current configuration count. The device may change any amount of data for one
 generation count increment. If the change cannot fit in one \msgref{EVENT_CONFIG}
-message, it \emph{SHOULD} be signaled to the driver via a \msgref{EVENT_CONFIG}
-message with a zero data length and the new generation count.
+message, the device \emph{SHOULD} send an \msgref{EVENT_CONFIG} message
+with a zero data length and the new generation count to the driver.
 The device \emph{MUST NOT} provide the same generation count in
 multiple \msgref{EVENT_CONFIG} messages that contain non-zero length config
 data. The driver includes its view of the current generation count in
@@ -296,7 +297,7 @@ \subsubsection{Bus vs. Transport Messages}
 \subsubsection{Endianness}
 \label{sec:Virtio Transport Options / Virtio Over Messages / Basic Concepts / Endianness}
 
-All encoding of values and fields defined in the virtio-msg messages \emph{MUST}
+All values and fields defined in the virtio-msg messages \emph{MUST}
 be encoded in little-endian.
 
 \subsubsection{Common Message Format}
@@ -309,12 +310,12 @@ \subsubsection{Common Message Format}
 The header layout is:
 \begin{lstlisting}
 struct virtio_msg_header {
-    uint8_t  type;      /* request/response + bus/transport */
-    uint8_t  msg_id;    /* message id */
-    uint16_t dev_num;   /* device number (0 for bus messages) */
-    uint16_t token;     /* correlation identifier (0 for events) */
-    uint16_t msg_size;  /* total size: header (8) + payload */
-    uint8_t  payload[];
+    u8       type;      /* request/response + bus/transport */
+    u8       msg_id;    /* message id */
+    le16     dev_num;   /* device number (0 for bus messages) */
+    le16     token;     /* correlation identifier (0 for events) */
+    le16     msg_size;  /* total size: header (8) + payload */
+    u8       payload[];
 };
 \end{lstlisting}
 
@@ -1342,10 +1343,10 @@ \subsubsection{Optional Requirements}
 \begin{itemize}
   \item A device or the driver side bus \emph{MUST} send \msgref{EVENT_CONFIG}
     to inform the driver of configuration of device status changes.
-  \item A device or the driver side bus \emph{MUST} \msgref{EVENT_USED}
+  \item A device or the driver side bus \emph{MUST} send \msgref{EVENT_USED}
     to inform the driver of (likely) buffer completions.
   \item A driver \emph{MUST} send \msgref{EVENT_AVAIL} to notify the device that
-    new buffers are posted.
+    new buffers are available.
 \end{itemize}
 
 \subsubsection{Compliance for Different Environments}